Joseph James Breunig 3rd
Bangor, Maine (USA)
Sunday, November 27, 2005

Evening Sky Comments

Rating: 4.6
Gazing into a starry night,
I see a deep indigo sky
with perfect placement of twinkling light.
Stars reveal the expanse of time


Joseph James Breunig 3rd
Chinedu Dike 30 October 2019
Well expressed thoughts in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, James.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2019
Evening sky leads towards a starry sky. With deep trust you see the deep indigo sky. Existence comes with trust and twinkling light reveals time. This poem is very excellently penned that amazes mind. Divine creation is beautifully shared with us. This is very nice poem that motivates readers....10
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Laura Green 12 September 2008
such beautiful imagery which creates a vivid image and pays homage to our creator. My analysis could be wrong, but i love the way you allude to the scientific aspects of the universe as well as complement the creator. Well written indeed
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Nikunj Parikh 15 March 2007
wonderful evening sky..... great work keep it up! !
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Marji Berry 27 December 2006
Thank you for sharing your beautiful Evening Sky with me!
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Conor Dowd 17 October 2006
Hi Joseph. Really enjoyed that. Good poem. Keep up the good work. Cheers Conor
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joey oo 16 October 2006
Such a seemingly 'endless' subject - captured beautifully. I always gaze up at the sky when I take the dog out last thing at night - every night it's different - it always fills me with wonder and awe... A brilliant poem - thank you for sharing... take care. joey
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Cecil (cj) Krieger 14 September 2006
Nice write Joseph... a fine wordsmith!
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We gain so much awareness from observation. To gaze in the 'Evening Sky' reminds me of the communication between stars and man! All that transpires has a timeless effect yet what is seen has happened so many light years ago. We remain there staring and absorbing. I like this poem very much. L
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It's part of our heritage and His eternal legacy. This is the truth finely said at the end.
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Ernestine Northover 19 March 2006
Beautiful and delightful, a pleasure to read. Just lovely. Love Ernestine XXX
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