Vijay Sai

Silver Star - 3,047 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Everyday Bread - Poem by Vijay Sai

Torn clothes
Severely shattered
Stitched and unstitched
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Topic(s) of this poem: sad


Comments about Everyday Bread by Vijay Sai

  • Tracy Craighead (9/13/2015 4:25:00 PM)

    very soulful, beautiful and sad. (Report)Reply

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  • Vian Sabri (10/12/2014 5:03:00 PM)

    Very sad poem, all the war of the world for this loaf of bread (Report)Reply

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  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (9/21/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    A sad poem on a destitute who earnd by singing. It's great u can express and narrate poeticaly in brevity.
    So nice to read u again.
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  • (8/24/2014 6:10:00 PM)

    just for a loaf of bread or a bowl of rice one hungers for the perfect life where there is nothing lacking and all one's desires are fulfilled..very sad and truthful poem.. (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (8/16/2014 1:40:00 AM)

    A beautiful write. loved your ink and emotions you have expressed. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed Al-balushi (7/23/2014 2:30:00 AM)

    Beautiful flow of words...Very true said n touching poem, thanks 4 sharing (Report)Reply

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  • (7/17/2014 4:15:00 AM)

    Touching poem Vijay, that is not an easy life but what can people do, they also need to survive, I always hope that one days things will be easier for them also.
    Siya_! !
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  • Omar Eldamsheety (7/16/2014 7:56:00 AM)

    A good poem... Thank you for inviting me to read it. (Report)Reply

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  • Lalit Kaira (7/14/2014 10:34:00 AM)

    a good sketch indeed (Report)Reply

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  • Chris Zachariou (7/10/2014 6:45:00 AM)

    A really great poem describing life for the poor which is alien to people of the Northern Hemisphere. I congratulate you on the pace of the poem, the simple choice of words and description you have used to make your point. (Report)Reply

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  • Brian Jani (7/4/2014 6:41:00 AM)

    A very touching poem here.i sometimes wish i had enough money to.help such people. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/2/2014 12:04:00 PM)

    A day! Help! Help! Another Day!
    Prayers from such a common man
    Might date a victory one day..........
    Though rising every day
    To see a loaf of bread
    Earned through toiling way............a very touching poem.................Vijay
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  • (6/30/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    You paint a sad picture in the poem in reality it is so true of poverty in the billions of souls on this earth...its good to bring it to the fore...regards (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (6/29/2014 3:57:00 PM)

    good thoughts about someone's true adventure in life. toiling for every day bread is something we all must do nicely written (Report)Reply

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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/28/2014 10:07:00 PM)

    Singing pleasantly
    Fighting to survive
    Reality clearly depicted in the poem. And compassion flows. I invite you to read some of my poems. Thank you.
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  • (6/24/2014 11:40:00 AM)

    Life of those living in poverty... nicely put..
    I like the title!
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  • (6/24/2014 7:06:00 AM)

    very touching poem.thank you for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Mihaela Pirjol (6/24/2014 6:41:00 AM)

    A vivid image of every day life.Good write. (Report)Reply

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  • Renu Kakkar (6/22/2014 12:39:00 PM)

    Observation in train and plight of beggers vividly depicted. (Report)Reply

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  • Chris Zachariou (6/22/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Wonderful description of the fight for survival in a poor country. I was very touched by this poem. (Report)Reply

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