Monday, May 5, 2008

Ex- Girlfriends Comments

Rating: 3.2
Uncertain drops
Of anguish
Filter through the night
While waste water

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David DeSantis
COMMENTS
Liz Thaugally 06 September 2009
Hi David, dropped by and re-read some of my favourite poems on here including this one.10/10. Although I belive we could also relate this to ex-boyfriends too! new poems on my own website, please do have a look when you have time! Love, Lizelah. www.lizelah.co.uk
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R H 17 May 2008
From the 'uncertain drops of anguish', the words in this poem don't just flow, they cascade to expose a surge of thoughts and images that ultimately beguile. The blending of shapes, colours and confusion give this poem an abstract quality that is both vbrant and lasting. justine.
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Greenwolfe 1962 13 May 2008
This is a very fine poem and its worthy of the writer. GW62
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LOVEFOOL Aka 09 May 2008
A really good intense read beautifully written as allways Thanks Nik
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~ Jon London ~ 06 May 2008
Ahh, bro...the very creatures that can make or break a man, I'm really not the one that can comment to be honest..as I'm still lost in this world waiting to be saved..but I love your magical way with expression...genius mate.. Stay strong Jon
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That is actually a seriously clever piece. (Try having ex boyfriends though and then think yourself lucky. :)) t x
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Rani Turton 06 May 2008
My kind of poem! I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks David.
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Onelia Avelar 06 May 2008
Yeay! This is the new poem? I like it very much: Uncertain drops / Of anguish / Filter through the night / While waste water / Droplets / Remove any light... Every new poem is better and better. I like the lightness of the metre and of the style of this one.
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This is superb! Brilliant cadence to it. HG: -) xx
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Ivor Hogg 05 May 2008
confusion reigns supreme in the wee small hours looking back over what could have been but is not
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Emancipation Planz 05 May 2008
the proof... you are not getting anywhere near my....... (like what you do with water though!)
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Michael Campbell 05 May 2008
great poem. lots of confusion running rampant in the back of the mind. i really enjoyed this one. lately you've been hitting my target well enough. thanks chief smoke.
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Kaela F. 05 May 2008
How accurately does this describe the confusion of emotions running through one's head during a breakup...Very wonderful writing. I enjoyed reading this very much...it captured the feelings to the 't' of how a breakup is.
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