Egal Bohen

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Examinations Of Our Minds - Poem by Egal Bohen

To those of us who judge unknowingly, or by deliberation I say this
That when, in judging others, we ourselves should exercise
Synchronous similar examinations, of our own minds
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  • Egal Bohen (11/10/2005 6:59:00 PM)

    Thank you Ernestine. My commas, Linda, some have gone, I must admit it reads OK without, just doesn't seem so long!
    Thanks to both of you for your comments.
    Sincerely
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  • Ernestine Northover (11/10/2005 1:19:00 PM)

    Now that is a clever one Egal, I enjoyed reading this very much, it certainly teaches us a few things which we should remember. Sincerely Ernestine (Report)Reply

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  • Linda Hepner (11/9/2005 10:30:00 PM)

    An interesting poem, Egal, approaching monumental. You could lose the commas though; let the words flow. The sentiments come over well and I like the serpents line.
    Linda
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