Excepting Me Poem by kayla B. mitchell

Excepting Me

Rating: 4.5


i dont want to be 'your best'... im fine being me
i dont want to be 'cool to you'... not trying to impress, thats not me
i dont want to be 'wasting time on you'... wen i can spend my time on myself
you might call me selfish, ... but thats something i cant help
i live, eat, breath for me, ... im just tryin to find that person who except me for me
i stand tall and strong for what i mean
my heart has been broken and put back together
guess who did it? oh i know, .... (me)
my glue might be cheap and thin lol
but exterior is not so paper thin
b/c i recover like no other
i just heal myself
so that problem doesnt happen again
and this goes for everyone
b/c ill never be the outside looking in
only me looking out the window
not knowing how they feel
makes it not real
which always bring me back to me
being (real) as much as i can be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 06 August 2011

Wow! A very impressive and well penned write! I love its transparency and and straight forwards message! A very strong sense of security is shown in this thought provoking write! I love your positive input filtered through this poem! 10+++ This is your stepping stone into the Poetry World and you did in such a positive way! I take my hat off for you! Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! God Bless! ...

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Unwritten Soul 06 August 2011

Except the bad then you accept yourself and that's brilliant move Kayla :) yes we need to love ourself coz when we being hurt the one who felt and cure is ourself... i like this poem to see from a person who have a bitter once but always creating sweet future lines later in life..Keep writing and believing the innerself coz that's how you bold the uniqueness in your day..like the spirit in this write_Unwritten Soul

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