Tuesday, February 13, 2007

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The ā€˜Iā€™ is who I am,
But flesh is all you see.
Does my name define me?


Jonzo Bandwagoner
Michael Brown 24 February 2007

I wish I could write like this! You truly have a gift keep it up!

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Landrey 13 February 2007

This is soo perfectly true and only in the last line does it become clear exactly what you're saying. This is genius. I love how the first stanza worked out so well visually. -landrey

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