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Ahmed Shammasi

Jubail, Saudi Arabia
Ahmed Shammasi
Jubail, Saudi Arabia
Monday, November 27, 2006

Fairwell Loved One (Tribute To My Father) Comments

Rating: 5.0
Time seems to go by real slow...
Like living a life on top of your own..
You wish it's just a dream and you'll wake up soon...
But you're told otherwise by the evening moon...

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Ahmed Shammasi
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Hadi Mahdi 27 November 2006
Great poem of yours... 'For the last time i greet you my lost one... May the moon bless you, and gaurds you the sun... '
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Tracey Collins 27 November 2006
well writen about a lost love one, the ryming was good fit perfect with the poem..
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Asma Bahrainwala 27 November 2006
a very poignant poem, ahmed... Asma...
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