Gajanan Mishra

Gold Star - 266,430 Points (3rd April 19sixty / Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India)

Family Members - Poem by Gajanan Mishra

All creatures are my family members.
This earth, this world is my home.
And at home there is no enemy,
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

without fear

Comments about Family Members by Gajanan Mishra

  • Rupert Hentzau (10/31/2017 6:02:00 AM)


    Sir, I get the feeling that you are more comfortable writing in your native tongue.
    When I read this poem, I notice that it meanders into prose and tends to become prosaic.
    The poem seems to be a translation into English or something that you have written in another language.
    It is full of your philosophy, and I'm not sure whether than philosophy is right, like
    'the three principles of goodness, passion and ignorance'.
    Who gave you that idea?
    Keats talks about beauty and truth in his Ode, and it makes more sense.
    But your statement is just 'made into the air' and makes no sense,
    Neither do you try to explain it.

    I believe the poem can be trimmed a great deal.
    What I can't understand is the stupid flattery of your reviewers.
    If you fall into the snare of seeking favorable comments,
    you will end up in a ditch.

    Please give up writing in a foreign language.
    Use your own native tongue,
    and you will be welcome!
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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/27/2016 9:54:00 PM)


    A very creative and compelling composition! (Report) Reply

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (4/20/2016 10:05:00 PM)


    Well understood about the society, world.thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Cigeng Zhang (4/14/2016 9:12:00 PM)


    Home is the warmest place in heart. My dear, You are my inseparable part/ I am Your fragment You are the whole
    I liked the lines. Beautiful.
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  • Ernest Makuakua (1/16/2016 2:42:00 AM)


    All the members
    Bear same five components
    Earth sky light air water,

    nice piece love it
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  • Ronald Strickland (1/10/2016 3:29:00 PM)


    You are a very great writer. I enjoy the read (Report) Reply

  • (10/12/2015 10:11:00 PM)


    a recipe of Love embroidered in the heart of men, you make every inch a place of honor and hope; such passion brings your prose in the echole on of pen, wonderful comes within the lines of poerty you extra. thank you for sharing and God bless (Report) Reply

    Sushil Kumar Tripathy Sushil Kumar Tripathy (10/21/2015 2:04:00 AM)

    Thanks for comments

  • Rajnish Manga (11/22/2014 4:44:00 AM)


    The essence of our philosophy has found its expression in this poem. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (11/13/2014 4:25:00 AM)


    True, the entire human race of this earth is a family and we all are dependent to each other in one way or other., rightly it's addressed here. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (11/7/2014 7:25:00 PM)


    Yes, it is of a truth. We are all family and a part
    of this vast earth. All are interwoven together.
    very inspiring.
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    Gajanan Mishra Gajanan Mishra (11/7/2014 11:04:00 PM)

    Thanks, let us see the world as our paradise..

  • (8/13/2014 3:11:00 AM)


    good thinking! Everybody must think the same way! (Report) Reply

  • Soumita Sarkar (6/24/2014 1:08:00 AM)


    How nice it would turn if the world becomes a home to all of us..................instead a war zone... (Report) Reply

  • (6/21/2014 1:37:00 PM)


    an ecocentric worldview. If all men view the world as you do, we won't have much ecological problem today. nice thought. (Report) Reply

  • Stephen Olufemi Omolara (12/2/2013 3:39:00 AM)


    Same product different shapes; same clay different mold and same thing in different colours. We are all from the soil. (Report) Reply

  • Neehu P (10/16/2013 9:32:00 AM)


    nice concept...can write better. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (10/7/2013 11:07:00 PM)


    In old indian myth it is said, this world is my relative. a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Cece D (10/4/2013 8:42:00 AM)


    THIS IS AMAZING :) :) :) ~Cece (Report) Reply

  • Mercy Moico (10/4/2013 8:18:00 AM)


    Good Poem! everything in this world is part of our life so we should treasure it. (Report) Reply

  • (10/4/2013 6:19:00 AM)


    Family the core of our being well displayed here with love and honesty thanks for sharing family love indeed...regards (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (10/3/2013 9:17:00 PM)


    Excellent! A thought provoking and well crafted write which I identify with 100%. Thank you for sharing and also for your honest comment on my poem! Keep it up! Regards from New York City www.romeodellavalle.com (Report) Reply










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