Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 219,529 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Far Star You Sing - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Dear super star, you sing
By your light you soon ring.
I am waiting here for you
New morning has come in dew.

Amazing morning is in list,
Covering veil the new mist.
When you will rest dear star
Come on in palm do not go far.

I need you to sing in light,
I never like to have a fight.
Flight of life makes mind,
I know you are very kind.

Far star you sing for me,
I am waiting here you see.
You are special among few,
In my life you are ever new.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, star


Comments about Far Star You Sing by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/10/2015 5:41:00 PM)


    I think poet sees life as a super star and desires that all the amazing charms of life may come in the fate line of his palm. A great poem..................10 (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/10/2015 10:42:00 AM)


    Adressing the star, you opened your mind towards it, which made it remarkable. Each stanza is so soft and calm. Thank you.10 (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/10/2015 1:33:00 AM)


    'Far star you sing for me,
    I am waiting here you see.
    You are special among few,
    In my life you are ever new.'

    Yes, indeed the ones we love truly remain always 'new' and bring light into our lives like a star too... A heartfelt poem.. Thank you for sharing...
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  • Kelly Kurt (11/9/2015 7:39:00 PM)


    The starts bring me inspiration too (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (11/9/2015 7:16:00 PM)


    Verily, Venus, the morning star, the symbol of love
    is truly a pleasing star
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 9, 2015



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