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Fashion Focus Artist (With A Sense Of Humor)

Rating: 4.3
I was photographed once
at a coffee shop—
completely unaware;

My head cast down
absorbed in the French latté
and unflinching conversation
of my biology text.

raveled in a multi-colored
woolen scarf and
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James Niles 21 February 2008
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Margaret Alice 16 September 2007
Reminds me of my photo taken at age 8 as I was looking out of the corner of my eyes to my friend in order to escape the painful flash - and how BAD I felt about that awful photo - NOBODY was ever captured like that - and my husband wants to know why I'm not interested in photography - there is something evil in it! Kind regards, Margaret.
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Joy Vanderhelm 28 October 2006
Quite a stirring picture of one moment in time... both the photo and the descrption of its capture. Well done.
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David Gerardino 09 September 2006
yawned and he flashed, the line fits, still not your best.........................
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Geoff Warden 09 September 2006
An excellent write Sus, I would agree with Anna's comment... you captured the beauty of being captured.......and Im sure the photo was perfect as well.......
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Brian Dorn 09 September 2006
Sus, I like the banality of the yawn... it was picture perfect! ! Great write! ! Brian
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Anna Russell 09 September 2006
You have captured the beauty of that moment in the same way the photographer captured the beauty of you - very well done Sus. Hugs Anna xxx
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A. Michael Sears 09 September 2006
Sus, I love this poem. It certainly captures a moment. I can see the whole scene. It makes me smile...and want a cup of coffee. So, I'm off to the MT Mug. Be good to you... a.m.
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John Tiong Chunghoo 09 September 2006
poetic talent shining through. catching me like a yawn.
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Marie Joyce Negapatan 09 September 2006
Simple yet it can effectively trigger an image of what you're trying to portray in your words. Good job! :)
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