Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 173,601 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Father Father - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Oh dear father, father
Morning has arrived to light
In right track I have seen,
I know you love me more
Sure you teach to know
The way properly as I walk
By your command we feel
In this command only it comes
The nourished life sparks
The balance of mind giggles
Where to move we know sure,
This dazzling vow marks
To speak about light it melts
Memories melt to love
Wise transformation you do
You build heaven on Earth
Replacement is seen nicely
While in pure mind we connect
You guide us well this path
Where we proceed to eternity
Oh dear father, father you tell
Always to have love in heart.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love and art, spiritual

Form: Prose Poem


Comments about Father Father by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Liza Sudina (10/29/2015 4:32:00 AM)


    it is read as if it was a quick and light flow from your heart!
    you love me more - MORE! parents always inspire us.
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  • Edmund Strolis (10/26/2015 9:56:00 AM)


    What is this world without a guiding light? To teach properly the way to walk that path. Your words nourish deeply. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/26/2015 9:45:00 AM)


    Such a soulful poem, very wisely written. Mind soothing. Great sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (10/26/2015 2:23:00 AM)


    Father is always in our heart, although they first love girl child, mother loves boy child. But they two have the love in the heart. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 25, 2015



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