Saheb Mohapatra

Gold Star - 5,064 Points (21-01-2003 / Odisha, India)

Father's Fun - Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

When the darkness encaged the glittering sun,
Words uttered from someone unknown.
I was frightened, my toes too started trembling
And when I woke up to find out the truth,
I found my father happily snoring.

Topic(s) of this poem: humour

Comments about Father's Fun by Saheb Mohapatra

  • Geetha JayakumarGeetha Jayakumar (10/23/2014 2:29:00 PM)

    Wow. Quite humorous write...loved reading it. (Report)Reply

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  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (10/20/2014 1:07:00 PM)

    This is simply beautiful and phenomenal write and short and funny as well....Saheb......but you have made it a
    sweet poem instead of limerick.....while composing limerick you should keep in mind its rules like
    lines 1,2 and 5 should rhyme and lines 3 and 4 should rhyme also, lines 1,2 and 5 should have 7 – 10 syllables and lines 3 and 4 should have 5 – 7 syllables. Any way a tenner from me for good composition

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  • Aftab Alam KhursheedAftab Alam Khursheed (10/20/2014 11:16:00 AM)

    So beautiful is your presentation of night- When the darkness caged the glittering sun, ...lovely that's the charm of poetry in the game of words- rhetoric..thank you very much (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 20, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 22, 2014

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