JOSE MURGUIA

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Fatherless Child. - Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

fatherless child,
rainy days and no smile,

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Comments about Fatherless Child. by JOSE MURGUIA

  • (9/20/2009 6:31:00 AM)

    An economy of words heightens the impact of this touching write. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/18/2009 2:08:00 PM)

    This poem is really touchin........I LOVE it! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/4/2009 8:21:00 AM)

    Endearing childlike simplicity in the phrasing. Well done. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/8/2009 7:21:00 PM)

    With a format like this,
    It is easy to do too much.

    You did a great job with succint phrasing.

    =]
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  • (3/2/2009 9:01:00 AM)

    that was a great poem..i liked it alot..and the poem just flowed very nicely (Report)Reply

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  • (2/22/2009 8:35:00 PM)

    Great work. I could feel the emotions with-in your poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/22/2009 1:08:00 PM)

    wow. I dont know my father & i wont. U need to just live your life freely. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/14/2009 3:53:00 AM)

    Jose,
    no one in this world is fatherless or motherless or spouseless for, God is our everything! Things will bw fine if only we listen to His calls and keep His codes.good, short poem.
    dr john celes
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  • (2/7/2009 3:22:00 PM)

    for a short peom, people may think of it as that,
    but if you read it with emotion, this peom gives off a deep feeling, and thast what peoms should do, try to give off some feeling, which your peoms usually do,
    great job.
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  • (2/2/2009 7:56:00 AM)

    short sweet and to the point great poem man (Report)Reply

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  • (1/29/2009 1:19:00 AM)

    thats reli good. i completely understand what your going thro and it makes the poem seem like its coming from somewhere dep in my head which i normally try to forget about. thats a reli deep poem. wel done :) (Report)Reply

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  • Karen Palero (1/16/2009 1:01:00 AM)

    i like the optimism you've marked in the last line..nice..! (Report)Reply

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  • C. P. Sharma (1/15/2009 10:49:00 PM)

    I loved the positivity in the lines:

    fatherless child,
    i know one day you will smile.
    CP
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  • (1/15/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    short but very good, ., ., i love simple stuff the best (Report)Reply

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  • (1/14/2009 4:18:00 PM)

    Simple but effective in getting your message across (Report)Reply

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  • (1/14/2009 3:18:00 PM)

    Nicely penned with a hope at the end. Well, some one has to go into the situation to feel how painful to be without the father. May your compassion bless him. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/11/2009 10:11:00 PM)

    i like this poem because it carries the burden of the child who is hurting inside due to the abscence of male influence but at the same time it uplifts that child's spirit with simple hope for a smile upon the child's face. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/9/2009 7:44:00 PM)

    i wish i could smile but i truely have no Father

    but that gives hope thanks it very good
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  • (1/7/2009 10:17:00 PM)

    so view words and yet so powerful. it shows the tremendous need to have a father or fatherfigure in someones life. great job. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/7/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    that ones wonderful! ! ! ! ! ! those are great rhyming tec (Report)Reply

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