s.zaynab kamoonpuri

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Fauna's Lost And Found! - Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

To purses of leather
one lost its skin
One lost its feather
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Topic(s) of this poem: Art


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Im an animal lover :)

Comments about Fauna's Lost And Found! by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

  • Bri Edwards (7/4/2017 7:42:00 PM)


    in poets notes: an apostrophe got poached i guess. ;)

    i too 'love' animals..............wild ones which are not gnawing or picking on my of course! but do we also stop lions from killing antelopes? or leopards from killing pythons? or perhaps an eagle from killing a peafowl? ?

    yes, 'animals' seem to kill mostly for food or protection, or so it seems. or for mates perhaps.

    and one definition of animals will include Homo sapiens/Humans! some animals i think kill for sport, e.g. 'house cats' which catch and 'play with' mice, grasshoppers and whatnot and often kill (i think) without eating the prey.

    i believe that humans and their ancestors killed for other than sport, or decorations, or shoes and handbags. now, for many humans, hunting is considered their right. and some animals, including fish, are managed for humans to kill as 'hunters'.and 'fishermen'.

    now, how about humans who go to their markets/grocery stores and buy dead animals or food containing parts of dead animals? ?

    i don't believe in God, but many do and my Christian church had in the Bible that 'men' were to use the Earth and its resources for their purposes (i believe that is at least partly accurate) .

    where does one draw the line? which animals are more important to protect, domestic chickens or birds-of-paradise? ? are any more 'important' than another? ?

    if polar bears become extinct, will the Earth fall apart? so many questions. but your poem does make your point very clear.

    as a kid i sometimes shot at birds, not really wanting to hit them of course, though i did at least three times. i cried once and buried the sparrow where my crime would not be noticed!

    now you see why i run out of time on the computer! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    bri :)
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  • Simone Inez Harriman (7/3/2017 2:40:00 AM)


    I love the peering through binoculars and shooting with cameras. Very well penned important poem. (Report) Reply

  • Adilson Pinto (7/2/2017 8:56:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem full of consciousness! Congratulations! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Akram Saqib (7/2/2017 1:36:00 AM)


    Love for nature and wild life is quite evident. passionate narration i like it (Report) Reply

  • (2/27/2017 5:26:00 PM)


    Regarding Fauna's Lost And Found, taka a look a Pray For The Beasts I suppose we share some sentiments. RFE (Report) Reply

  • Laurie Van Der Hart (2/4/2017 10:03:00 PM)


    Well done for focusing attention on this sad but true topic. Very well written! (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (10/13/2015 7:05:00 AM)


    I love this poem of grace and support to Nature. (Report) Reply

  • Darlene Walsh (8/1/2015 3:21:00 PM)


    A very sad, and very true poem. The famous, and protected, lion Cecil was killed by an American dentist last week. I just read today that his brother Jericho, who has been protecting Cecil's cubs, was shot and killed today. I don't know why some people are so cruel?
    I wish more people would read, and learn from, such thoughtful poem's such as yours.
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  • (8/1/2015 9:59:00 AM)


    Passionately written. I really enjoyed this poem and agree with every word. (Report) Reply

  • Ging Taping (7/31/2015 5:43:00 AM)


    HOPE THIS WILL BECOME AN EYE OPENER..SAVE LIFE..SAVE ANIMALS.

    CONGRATULATION! ! KEEP IT UP GURL
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  • (7/11/2015 4:38:00 AM)


    Poaching is not needed as there are so many simulated goods being produced nowadays. (Report) Reply

  • Rutvi Padhy (6/13/2015 9:28:00 AM)


    lovely: -D its very important that we respect the life n existence of everything n everyone around us...ur poem conveyed a very important message: -) beautifully written verses that portray a very important theme; -) rely loved it: -) (Report) Reply

  • (6/10/2015 10:21:00 AM)


    Lovely poem and I by all means agree. Life is sacred and should remain unharmed. (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2015 10:24:00 AM)


    Your amaizing words are heart touching giving sensation of life to numbness. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (5/9/2015 10:31:00 AM)


    How do you return a severed tusk to the elephant?
    Fur to the lynx cat?
    Skinned skin to the python?
    Or ripped feathers to the peacock?
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    Shoot them with cameras
    Instead of through guns- - - - Excellent write on violence against animals.
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  • Kelly Kurt (4/3/2015 7:50:00 PM)


    Thank you for bringing this issue to the forefront through your wonderful poem (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/23/2015 6:07:00 AM)


    Peep through binoculars
    instead of through guns
    Shoot 'em' with cameras
    instead of weapons
    O' hunters shun hunting
    with darned shotguns!
    Amazing message, amazing poem................10
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  • Fabrizio Frosini (12/26/2014 10:33:00 AM)


    Shoot 'em' with cameras
    instead of weapons

    HOW TRUE! nicely written lines
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (10/31/2014 10:58:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem touching indeed. Great message.....
    Still how do you restore
    this lost and found to their rightful owners?

    Each lines are beautifully portrayed. very true said, How do you return a severed tusk to the elephant? It's not possible to return back the lost after finding it. No one can fix it back. In this case even if found it's of no use. The damage is already done. Lost is lost forever.

    Very well deserved poem of the day! Congrats. Superb write. Loved it.
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  • (10/20/2014 2:40:00 PM)


    This poem touched my heart. A strong message delivered here with excellent poetic skills. So glad to read it as member poem. (Report) Reply










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