olga hernandez

Rookie (05-19-1994)

Fear - Poem by olga hernandez

My hands shivering of fear my stomach in so much pain, only if you knew, knew what i'm going through without you it's different without you it's not the same. My heart used to sing beautiful melodies, now it only sings painful tunes.Tears dropp like a rain forest lots of tears can form a river of pain. My life is lost like a kid in a forest screaming for help, my heart is broken like an expensive peice of jewlery.


Comments about Fear by olga hernandez

  • (9/24/2008 5:15:00 PM)


    This is another example of a poem that does have something to say.
    But because of the presentation and structure it doesn't get the reader
    on board the train that leads to nowhere.

    GW62
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 24, 2008


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