......Feel My Pain..........(Dark Comments

very impressive! ! the sadnesss, the pain, the greif, as if your heart was pulled out.The only thing that will cure your pain is time! ! ! I have been there and have healed. to help heal you I give my highest rating10+++

such a heartbreaking poem but yet so clear and ungerstanding you cant help but like it... very good writing

You take the classic argument that another day will always, and you say, but I will feel just the same way. Rings true for me too.

So heart breaking but beautiful!

a sad beautiful write

An amazing, and touching poem. It reminds me of alot back home...keep writing man, keep writing.

I'll give you this misery, I breathe I rather take all your pains No another day will come! And I still feel the same! .. no u will not be in pains any more. it is temporary set back.. what a lovely presentation from poet....10 read m ine..mary to marry, miss i miss u, butterflies around and no separate ways

a feeling perfectly described in words. thankyou keep writing

A feelingly written poem. CP

She will not come back again But my heart continues to bleed A feeling many find in life - thank you

beautifully writeen! ! truly lookx from ur heart: D

a very sensitively written lamentation. Nice work

Let one be sensitive enough to ones crossesin able to understand the pain inside.......10+++

let the pain and scar kept at bay.........and smile and joy embaras you...... very good write.........see 10 +