Eyan Desir

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......Feel My Pain..........(Dark - Poem by Eyan Desir

Another day has gone
My mind keeps holding on
Sour memories of what that has been
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Comments about ......Feel My Pain..........(Dark by Eyan Desir

  • (7/11/2009 10:43:00 AM)

    very impressive! !
    the sadnesss, the pain, the greif, as if your heart was pulled out.The only thing that will cure your pain is time! ! ! I have been there and have healed.
    to help heal you I give my highest rating10+++
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  • (7/11/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    such a heartbreaking poem but yet so clear and ungerstanding you cant help but like it... very good writing (Report)Reply

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  • (7/11/2009 9:53:00 AM)

    You take the classic argument that another day will always, and you say, but I will feel just the same way. Rings true for me too. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/11/2009 9:35:00 AM)

    So heart breaking but beautiful! (Report)Reply

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  • (7/11/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    a sad beautiful write (Report)Reply

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  • (7/8/2009 11:45:00 PM)

    An amazing, and touching poem. It reminds me of alot back home...keep writing man, keep writing. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/8/2009 9:10:00 PM)

    I'll give you this misery, I breathe
    I rather take all your pains
    No another day will come!
    And I still feel the same! .. no u will not be in pains any more. it is temporary set back.. what a lovely presentation from poet....10

    read m ine..mary to marry, miss i miss u, butterflies around and no separate ways
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  • (7/8/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    a feeling perfectly described in words. thankyou keep writing (Report)Reply

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  • C. P. Sharma (7/7/2009 10:14:00 PM)

    A feelingly written poem.
    CP
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  • (7/5/2009 1:16:00 PM)

    She will not come back again
    But my heart continues to bleed

    A feeling many find in life - thank you
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  • (7/5/2009 1:26:00 AM)

    beautifully writeen! !
    truly lookx from ur heart: D
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  • (7/4/2009 11:52:00 PM)

    This will not be anything like the comments before this...but holy shit i can totally relate. Plz excuse the language but im much to tired right now to think of the better proper words that means much more than profanity but hell...sometimes simple is gewd. lmfao im rambling and all i need to say is this is a damn good poem and its a definite 10. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/4/2009 5:40:00 PM)

    a very sensitively written lamentation. Nice work (Report)Reply

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  • (7/4/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    Let one be sensitive enough to ones crossesin able to understand the pain inside.......10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • (7/3/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    let the pain and scar kept at bay.........and smile and joy embaras you...... very good write.........see 10 + (Report)Reply

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