Friday, July 3, 2009

......Feel My Pain..........(Dark Comments

Rating: 4.7
Another day has gone
My mind keeps holding on
Sour memories of what that has been
But all this pondering

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Eyan Desir
COMMENTS
Howard Kern 11 July 2009
very impressive! ! the sadnesss, the pain, the greif, as if your heart was pulled out.The only thing that will cure your pain is time! ! ! I have been there and have healed. to help heal you I give my highest rating10+++
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A T 11 July 2009
such a heartbreaking poem but yet so clear and ungerstanding you cant help but like it... very good writing
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Patti Masterman 11 July 2009
You take the classic argument that another day will always, and you say, but I will feel just the same way. Rings true for me too.
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Elizabeth Marco 11 July 2009
So heart breaking but beautiful!
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Carol Gall 11 July 2009
a sad beautiful write
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Brian Marion 08 July 2009
An amazing, and touching poem. It reminds me of alot back home...keep writing man, keep writing.
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I'll give you this misery, I breathe I rather take all your pains No another day will come! And I still feel the same! .. no u will not be in pains any more. it is temporary set back.. what a lovely presentation from poet....10 read m ine..mary to marry, miss i miss u, butterflies around and no separate ways
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Aekg Navrilith 08 July 2009
a feeling perfectly described in words. thankyou keep writing
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C. P. Sharma 07 July 2009
A feelingly written poem. CP
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The Dreamer 05 July 2009
She will not come back again But my heart continues to bleed A feeling many find in life - thank you
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Broken Heart 05 July 2009
beautifully writeen! ! truly lookx from ur heart: D
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Eddie Roa 04 July 2009
a very sensitively written lamentation. Nice work
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Catrina Heart 04 July 2009
Let one be sensitive enough to ones crossesin able to understand the pain inside.......10+++
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rago rago 03 July 2009
let the pain and scar kept at bay.........and smile and joy embaras you...... very good write.........see 10 +
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