Thursday, November 1, 2007

Filter Out The Madness. Comments

Rating: 3.0
everything i do, i do savagely
and God pries the living out of the losers' hands.

He never hears me.


Claire Avaline
Callie Carroll 15 July 2009
The bar scene, so subtly drawn, captured my attention. The last stanza, a stunner.
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~ Jon London ~ 23 March 2009
There's a depth to this that i admire, nice work
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Ivan Donn Carswell 14 August 2008
An intriguing mix of tenses - and focii, but the message is clear. I can remember a maddening confusion which I thought emanated from me! Rgds, Ivan
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