Final Victory Poem by Dennis Ryan

Final Victory



January 31,2004; revised Monday morning, January 28,2019 at 11: 10 a.m.

"Know then that the world exists for you.For you is the phenomenon perfect."
- Ralph Waldo Emerson, "Nature"

"I'd do them no dishonor... but defy the city?I have no strength for that."
- Sophocles, Antigone
Can final victory be discerned in a final dispute
between sisters at a palace altar, followed by one
being buried alivebecause she demands honor
for the body of her fallen, deceased brother?
I hear no echo of this final dispute, no record
of this death in the speeches of the great lecturer
who declared final victory: "The kingdom of man
over nature, which cometh not with observation..."
"The kingdom of man" is an abomination, a fabrication.
Our incompleteness is enough to desire completeness,
renders us humble. I would allow a defeated daughter
to plead my case, for I amflawed, failed, passionate.
"Wonders are brought to our door".The chorus of wise
elders happen by following hard upon the sisters' dispute.

Listen, as they come: "But now for Victory! Glorious
in the morning, joy in her eyes..." And the king:
"My countrymen, the ship of state is safe.The gods—"
Stopped, not yet at mid-sentence, and twenty-three centuries
later an agonizing, antinomian confession from the lecturer:
"A transforming greatness seems very near, yet I am haunted
by a sense of incapacity... Life is a strange alternation of
contradictory states; I am all in all to myself, but I am nothing
I ought to be."From such deep contradiction and complication,
from that downwardmost, inwardmost, most intense moment
of understanding, Emerson finally realized that final victory
is elusive, that "Nature" is a power not to be taken for granted.

Monday, January 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: courage,death,human condition,nature,sisterly love,sisters,tradition,tragedy,victory,women
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The speaker of the poem recounts the story of Antigone, daughter of Oedipus, and notes that Ralph Waldo Emerson's confidence in Man, as opposed to "Nature" (i.e. the animal and plant world) , is overrated,that Emerson himself came to this realization while deep in thought and reports such.
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Dennis Ryan

Dennis Ryan

Wellsville, New York
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