Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 195,131 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Fire And Movement - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I know sweet heart your arms of beauty,
I know sweet heart your charms of beauty,
You moved with all the forms of beauty,
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Topic(s) of this poem: independence


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Remaining engaged in worldly trades at last the trader starts preparations for the ultimate divine trade.

Comments about Fire And Movement by Akhtar Jawad

  • (3/4/2015 4:32:00 AM)

    An amazing poem........................10 (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (10/22/2014 2:18:00 AM)

    Effulgent and beautiful soothing write. Thanks for share. (Report)Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (10/21/2014 2:50:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. You have captured all the amazing beauty in your romantic lines....
    Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.
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  • (10/21/2014 1:53:00 AM)

    No ally came for the rescue and helpless I was,
    My wisdom shown his back thoughtless I was,
    Deaf and dumb, blind in love, harmless I was,
    Unconditional surrender, cause arm-less I was.................magic of love.....nice sir
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  • Amitava Sur (10/20/2014 7:41:00 PM)

    A lovely description of wideness and vastness of love from your sweet heart with which you are overwhelmed with joy and peace.
    Be happy, be joyous and always remain immersed and dipped in it..... loved it
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  • Ramesh Rai (10/20/2014 7:09:00 AM)

    ou are ruling my heart, about five decades!
    Mutiny of my soul although still in the shades,
    Go ahead, are the signals with divine upgrades,
    Independence from you, and the worldly trades!
    I pray the Almighty for completion century. Regards
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  • Valsa George (10/20/2014 1:24:00 AM)

    Amazing write with wonderful rhythm and alliteration! So you are held a life long prisoner in her bewitching love! I believe there is a heavenly charm in this captivity and you don't want to break yourself free! Kudos! A sure 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/19/2014 11:14:00 PM)

    As per the note below the poem..Creating wildness to be wild, that's - fire and Move..well composed thank you (Report)Reply

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