Sunday, October 19, 2014

Fire And Movement Comments

Rating: 5.0
I know sweet heart your arms of beauty,
I know sweet heart your charms of beauty,
You moved with all the forms of beauty,
You attacked my heart with storms of beauty.

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Akhtar Jawad
COMMENTS
Khalid Saifullah 04 March 2015
An amazing poem........................10
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Ramesh Rai 22 October 2014
Effulgent and beautiful soothing write. Thanks for share.
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 October 2014
Beautiful poem. You have captured all the amazing beauty in your romantic lines.... Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.
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Salini Nair 21 October 2014
No ally came for the rescue and helpless I was, My wisdom shown his back thoughtless I was, Deaf and dumb, blind in love, harmless I was, Unconditional surrender, cause arm-less I was.................magic of love.....nice sir
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Amitava Sur 20 October 2014
A lovely description of wideness and vastness of love from your sweet heart with which you are overwhelmed with joy and peace. Be happy, be joyous and always remain immersed and dipped in it..... loved it
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Ramesh Rai 20 October 2014
ou are ruling my heart, about five decades! Mutiny of my soul although still in the shades, Go ahead, are the signals with divine upgrades, Independence from you, and the worldly trades! I pray the Almighty for completion century. Regards
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Valsa George 20 October 2014
Amazing write with wonderful rhythm and alliteration! So you are held a life long prisoner in her bewitching love! I believe there is a heavenly charm in this captivity and you don't want to break yourself free! Kudos! A sure 10
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 October 2014
As per the note below the poem..Creating wildness to be wild, that's - fire and Move..well composed thank you
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