Mandy Baldwin

Rookie (London)

First Love - Poem by Mandy Baldwin

You with the sunset in your hair
And the slanting shadows from the hazel hedge
And the bats, flitting in the evening air
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Comments about First Love by Mandy Baldwin

  • Luis Estable (10/9/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    A fine verse this is, with a poetic feel to it. The words were well-cosen for they carry much poetry, I have to admit. In the general I like what you have done here, and I commend you to continue writing this type of good poetry.

    Take care now.
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