Ann Beard

Veteran Poet - 1,170 Points (1944 / London. UK)

First Love - Poem by Ann Beard

“I would like to help”, little more than a whisper,
misty brown eyes turned to stare where I stood.
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  • Abhimanyu Kumar.s (11/21/2017 6:52:00 AM)

    I admit this story of make up life yet accepting first love. Nice (Report)Reply

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  • (8/13/2015 5:22:00 AM)

    Thanks for the experience.. (Report)Reply

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  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/17/2014 12:47:00 AM)

    I stood, said goodbye, numb of all thoughts of love,
    but on leaving the hospice a youth took my hand.
    And with eyes full of tears I turned to the son of
    the man who had magic and sang in a band.
    An excellent poem portraying realities of life, pertaining love, pain and pleasure.10/10
    Col Muhammad Khalid khan
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    Ann Beard(11/18/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    Thank you I appreciate your kind comment.

    Ann Beard(11/18/2014 12:18:00 AM)

    Thank you I appreciate your kind comment

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  • Akhtar Jawad (9/28/2014 9:00:00 PM)

    First love, a sweet memory, a nice pom, a work of art,11th rating of 10 from me. (Report)Reply

    Ann Beard(9/29/2014 1:13:00 AM)

    Thank you.

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  • (8/4/2009 6:38:00 AM)

    Absolutely beautiful, goes to my faves. Wonderfully written. Draws the reader into such a sad and poignant tale where they feel the emotions there........10+++.... (Report)Reply

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  • (8/3/2009 10:43:00 PM)

    Beautiful sentiments, Ann, nicely expressed: the tenderness and passion of the past blended with the tension and tenderness of the present. :) (Report)Reply

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  • (5/6/2009 2:33:00 AM)

    i feel the same way..amazing poem! ! beautiful write (Report)Reply

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  • (4/22/2008 2:13:00 PM)

    This is a great one for sure. I'll say more in another
    message to you.

    GW62
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  • (3/9/2008 7:32:00 AM)

    My friend an extraordinary effort indeed! Vividly poignant. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/1/2008 10:57:00 PM)

    such a lovely penning......arousing myriads of emotions...
    'good memories outlive those that cause pain'.........so true
    loved it will live by it
    tnx 4 sharing
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  • (12/19/2007 1:34:00 PM)

    A well written emotional poem and a joy to read, thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/4/2007 11:42:00 PM)

    A perfect recall of love memory, it vividly express the sentiments of lovers who once fell in love that did not last. Yet, though short true love had been shared and cherished. The poem is splendidly written to last a lifetime in the hearts of lovers. Thanks for sharing mam. Loved it! Highest marks. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/4/2007 10:32:00 PM)

    Beautiful rhythm... it catches you up and carries you along in the flow of the character's emotion. Wonderful write, I enjoyed it immensely. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/4/2007 10:11:00 PM)

    this one is full of scenery..i seemed to have watched a very nice movie reading through the lines... (Report)Reply

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  • (9/4/2007 10:00:00 PM)

    Perfectly, beautifully, tragically penned. Rhyming scheme spot on. You should be proud of yourself for this one for sure. t x (Report)Reply

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