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First Schizoid State

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Be real now.
I have never been real;
No one is as unreal as I am.
When I wanted to be real,
I created disaster.
For me, and for others.
Because I didn't believe in reality.
So I played it as a game,
Going through the motions,
And the others got piqued

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Daubmir 14 September 2018

Glad you like it, thanks.... Still searching for purpose. Ciao.

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Monika 13 September 2018

Beautiful poem. The poet judges himself harshly and feels intense emotions of longing and dispair. Nothing schizoid here.

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Daubmir Nadir 03 May 2006

William, the only medication I need is the full perception others like you absorb my vibrations and... vibrate! Merci bien, mon ami. P.S. And I think I should follow to the sort of 'prescription' Trisha is suggesting... Yep, definitely.

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Will Barber 02 May 2006

You need medication, but it's a wonderful screed.

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