Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 147,079 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

First Winter Rain - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Monsoon has gone away
There is no sign of rain
But winter has lightly entered
Little coldness we feel here
To welcome winter cloud cries
Cloud arrives in East sky
To make wise rain of wisdom
In this context we feel this
Sure we define life in mind
Having a feeling on greengage
Trees are happy to get water
Leaves are smiling more
In this shiny hub of life
We need water at time
To minimize thirst of winter
Just rain has arrived
To leave memory behind
To hold value we see
With imagination and learning
We admire first winter rain
To love God this rain speaks
And we agree to see rainbow.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death, rain drops, spiritual, winter


Comments about First Winter Rain by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/31/2015 9:43:00 AM)


    Verily, the combination of winter and rain, a fine source for a
    Poet with the nature's flair.
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  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (10/31/2015 2:23:00 AM)


    Lively union of life, nature and God. I see a creative vision and the bonding of verses from season to season, connecting to our very existence is wonderfully noted. Concealed within each sentence, a similarity to the experience in life. Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/30/2015 10:08:00 PM)


    With the first rain, Earth wears a garment of green! Life gets a fresh start! It heralds rainbow into the sky and into human minds! A beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/30/2015 8:50:00 AM)


    Wow.. a marvellous one. First rain of winter brings a shivering joy and we always agree to see rainbow to paint our hearts again. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/30/2015 6:13:00 AM)


    First winter rain is welcome always. A beautiful feeling is delivered in the poem.Thank you, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2015



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