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Thursday, June 22, 2006

Five Fingers Comments

Rating: 4.8
Perfectly fitted as if by design
Your five fingers woven in mine
Coupled palms sublimely connecting
Severed love lines now intersecting


Brian Dorn
Susan Williams 09 September 2020
Perfectly fitted as if by design Your five fingers woven in mine- - - > holding the hand of the one you love is another way to make love
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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2019
it's really beautiful poem shared Your five fingers woven in mine Coupled palms sublimely connecting/// beautiful writings
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Marvin Brato 15 October 2007
It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10.
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Michael Fischer 29 April 2007
Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks! -Michael
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Melvina Germain 16 February 2007
Oh Brian, this is a most beautiful love poem, What a lovely change to read something about love, I lilke that---Melvina---
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Sandy Jensen 10 February 2007
so romantic..wish someone would write a poem like that about my fingers..its so refreshing to read poems of love written from the masculine perspective.. so passionate, astute and sensual.
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jack russell 07 January 2007
Beautifully crafted poem. Fits me like a warm glove. All plaudits are well deserved! Best wishes. jack
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Not a member No 4 10 December 2006
Six lines that perfectly fit their function. A poetic arrow that hits the bulls-eye. jim
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Arti Chopra 06 December 2006
absolutely beautiful in just a few lines...You have conveyed so much. I love this poem..well done Bryan Arti
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Gregory Gunn 14 November 2006
Don't know how else to say this, but 'For a poem that uses rhyme, / This one is absolutely divine.' It is one of those where it crossed my mind, hey, why didn't I think of that? High praise from Mr. Shot Gunn.
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Christine K. Trease 02 November 2006
Brian, I LOVE this piece! It's simplistic yet powerful. You have combined a powerhouse of words eloquently! Great write!
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Kathy Anderson 03 October 2006
Sweet sweet sweet and perfectly divine! Love it.
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Mary Naylor 30 September 2006
An enchanting poem! I enjoyed it very much.
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Melvina Germain 29 September 2006
I've always said along with others, Good things come in small packages. This is a wonderful poem Brian. Melvina
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Lynne Bc 12 August 2006
Loved this Brian. Thanks for this wonderful thoughts. Cheers, Lynne
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Ruby Root 16 July 2006
Hi Brian, I love your poetry, it is light and fun. You sound like you are happy soul. Excellent poem take care.
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Diana Poems 11 July 2006
Beautifully written. Lovely imagery and very compassionately done. Very nice, thanks! Keep writing :)
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Chuck Audette 06 July 2006
Truly great poetry here. 10 for sure! -chuck
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John Tiong Chunghoo 06 July 2006
two boats of bliss sailing through universe. good one brian.
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Aisha Sherazi 05 July 2006
Wow. Sorry, cliche I know, but wow. Peace, Aisha
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