Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 211,443 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Flipside (Tanka) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Amidst winter's grip
First meeting of skin and sheet
Braces the body
Mid-slumber's intermission
Seeks cool side of the pillow

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Tanka

Comments about Flipside (Tanka) by Kelly Kurt

  • Dimitrios Galanis (1/17/2016 4:00:00 AM)

    Through your verses come into existence moments neglected or ignored.Now I realize that it was the poesy which made us humans as not only in front of us to see water, food, enemies against to fight. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/17/2016 8:54:00 AM)

    I enjoy looking at the moments of life that seldom get put into verse

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  • Wes Vogler (1/17/2016 2:54:00 AM)

    So now I have to go take a look at Tanka education is interesting Betcha I can. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/17/2016 8:53:00 AM)

    I think you will enjoy the form and its possibilities

  • Pamela Sinicrope (1/15/2016 3:12:00 PM)

    I used to have the same issue until I switched to a water pillow. I like the sound of the line, Mid-slumber's intermission/ seeks cool side of the pillow' It has a nice ring to it. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/15/2016 5:11:00 PM)

    A water pillow sounds interesting. I wake up multiple times throughout the night and flip my pillow

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/14/2016 10:03:00 PM)

    Mid-slumber's intermission seeking cool side of pillow is very amazingly humorous and expressive in this Tanka shared. Fantastic poem drafted and sheared really.10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/15/2016 1:20:00 PM)

    The bed is initially cold against my body when first climbing in. After a few hours, no matter how cold my room is, the pillow warms up and needs to be flipped to the cool side. Maybe it's just me. : -)

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 14, 2016

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