Saturday, June 5, 2004

Floating On Cold Water Comments

Rating: 4.8

No vanity fair magazine
to float on cold water
and arc further out
with sea moss and iodine kelp


Jimi Doyle
Susan Bagley 05 December 2006

Very nice. I especially like 'tiny blue flowers willing themselves up through cracks like carpet' If you like my 'Desire' poem, you will like the 'Need' and 'Your Kiss' poem also. thanks for compliments and I like your writing also. :) Susan

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