Adeline Foster

Gold Star - 9,222 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

.fog - Poem by Adeline Foster

. Fog

Over that mountain the sun is shining
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Topic(s) of this poem: nostalgia, poem, remembrance

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Just words that seem to run together
While drving through the fog one morning.

Comments about .fog by Adeline Foster

  • Liza Sudina (3/16/2016 2:26:00 AM)

    such a repentance is hidden in it:

    Over that mountain our children come seeking
    That which they've thrown away.
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  • Alexander Beebe (9/27/2013 8:11:00 PM)

    Love this poem. It took me immediately to a mountain valley. Very well written (Report) Reply

  • (6/13/2013 6:21:00 PM)

    A fine write to remind us of the fog of time that lingers and the sun of change that burns it off and reveals a new and ever changing day but inextricably linked to the good things of the past. (Report) Reply

  • Greg Davidson (4/24/2013 5:08:00 PM)

    the words just just randomly come so often amaze me. such powerful images both on the surface and at that deep level (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (4/22/2013 12:11:00 AM)

    ((Just words that seem to run together)) ... of course words form a string of images and ideas when they come from a master hand, they don't stay as just words, but become a meaningful poem...! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (3/27/2013 3:53:00 AM)

    very beautiful poem with lots of visuals... (Report) Reply

  • (3/25/2013 4:22:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem with a beautiful flow to it. (Report) Reply

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