David Zvekic

Rookie (It was many and many a year ago / In a kingdom by the sea)

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Oh! Shut my brain; Don't make me feel
  my pain, your pain, you've made it real.

You've tied down hope; I'm half as tall,
  where once pride stood stands none at all.

I've lost my breath but I can't leave,
  drowned by this rage I cannot breathe.

You've locked hate with me in your cell:
  A broken will wears an empty shell.

But numbed I'll carry on a while.
  My pain, my pain taught me to smile.

A mangled scar - I've lost my fear
  and found myself

            ... but I'm still here...


- October 26 2005


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  • (10/31/2005 4:15:00 AM)

    Some moments in your poem i can really
    relate to, i enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
    Kindest Regards Slim.x.
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  • (10/30/2005 9:25:00 PM)

    An awsome poem david, it really reaches out to me. kepp it up! ! Angel (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 30, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 16, 2005


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