Seema Aarella

Rookie - 82 Points (19 Mar 1979 / KGF, India)

Forbidden Desire - Poem by Seema Aarella

The enchanted dance of
A lonesome peacock
Ended in the affectionate
........................
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Topic(s) of this poem: desire

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Forbidden Desire by Seema Aarella

  • (12/8/2008 4:50:00 PM)

    bravo, bravo the whole poem is extremely beautiful but the last stanza is superb...i loved it Seema ji and it goes to my fav,10++++++++++++ and A++++++++++++ for this marvellous write...thanks
    rgds
    asif
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  • Kesav Easwaran (12/8/2008 4:37:00 AM)

    the last stanza lines are full of sweet sensual imageries...a peacock usually commences dancing as and when a moist cloud ready to drizzle out is spotted high in the sky...ten for this imaginative peahen...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (12/5/2008 2:57:00 AM)

    'twisted ecstasy' 'shade of a thicket' 'Discharging a current' 'striking again and again'

    blush blush blush! ! superb!
    great allegorical eloquence seema!
    10++++
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  • (11/30/2008 2:12:00 AM)

    Seema----a forbidden desire---discharging a current? ? ? ? ?
    electrifying poem ++++++++10
    anjali
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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/28/2008 12:57:00 AM)

    Something unpleasant caught in between.............desired love becomes forbidden.Excellent Seema. (Report)Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (11/25/2008 11:36:00 PM)

    Soon the clouds of forbidden desire
    Clustered on my lonely skies
    Discharging a current of
    Your intense thoughts
    That kept striking again and again……….

    To write such lines so subtly and yet so arrestingly, so much calibre is required and that caliber you possess to my delight. it is my fortune that i got to read your lines. your vocabulary gannery is so vast that you use them in apt places. i marvel st you.
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