Khairul Ahsan

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Forbidden Fruit - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

My Guru forbade me
To touch you, ever!
But I was allowed to
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Durmut, Melandaha
Jamalpur, Bangladesh.

02 February 2014
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Comments about Forbidden Fruit by Khairul Ahsan

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (2/8/2014 11:14:00 AM)

    Khairul, I simply loved this poem...Forbidden things have an appeal of their own just because they are forbidden... (Report)Reply

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  • Noreen Carden (2/7/2014 9:45:00 AM)

    I like this its lighthearted and forbidden fruit is always tempting.Nice poem Khairul enjoyed reading. (Report)Reply

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  • Soulful Heart (2/7/2014 1:26:00 AM)

    so tempting.......................as if something is better than nothing (Report)Reply

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  • (2/6/2014 1:59:00 AM)

    We are still paying for Adam and Eve's transgressions. Better safe than sorry. All of us have temptaciones and we cannot blame the serpent all the time. Your poem is so explicit and flows beautifully making us feel your sentiments so vividly and well expressed. You captivate the reader with your poetic blend.of give but can't take. Very good work. (Report)Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (2/3/2014 10:59:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem, but a humorous one too. Though this poem looks humorous, it has a in-depth meaning.
    My Guru can be taken as ones inner feelings. Initially Guru or my inner thoughts draw a line...but as the time went on, the person feelings changes. I think it this way....Comments can vary from person to person. I really loved the way you presented it.
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