Sunday, May 6, 2018

Forbidden Love Comments

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He knocks down my defences.
Brick by brick I become exposed.
I soften to his words as he moulds me to his needs.
Afraid of what he's created, he can no longer complete the game.


Trace Skye
Jazib Kamalvi 19 October 2020
Write comment. Such a nice poem, Trace skye. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
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E Chell 16 October 2020
Love this, I think if each statement was given a full stop rather than a comma it would make each one stronger. Give him time to say it with impact rather than in one flow. I want you, I need you, I love you he says,
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Trace Skye 19 October 2020
Taken onboard and amended as you're spot on. Thanks
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Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2018
I soften to his words as he moulds me to his needs. falling into what we should not do can be very serious and bring serious consequences........ thank u dear poetess. tony
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Trace Skye 13 May 2018
Indeed it can be a serious game. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Avik Roy 08 May 2018
I cannot sum up my feelings about this poem other than saying...You spoke my language Trace. Thanks a lot.
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Trace Skye 08 May 2018
Thank you for taking the time to read Forbidden Love.
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