Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Fractured Violence Comments

Rating: 2.7
The small girl was sold like a slave
The middle man cuddling her with a candy
The fat house wife suffered blues
From the riches in her neighbors


Sadiqullah Khan
Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 17 November 2014
Very sad story about violence against a young girl and jealousy in human heart. Thanks for sharing this story. Your writing makes the story known and our conscience is stirred.
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Reshma Ramesh 27 January 2010
what heart wrenching write sadiq, there was a similar incident here in Bangalore, where the small child child who worked as a maid was tortured, oil poured on her back, she was made to work day n night without clothes......sad, very sad. a commendable write.
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Rani Turton 26 January 2010
And with ths poem you have given her a name and a voice instead of her just being a statistic. Thanks Sadiq for people like you.
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