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Free Choice (Cleave/Trigee)

Rating: 4.5

If...............The only certainty
one has..........is
faith............that something exists;
then.............it follows that
one..............ego is sufficient and
has no need......necessarily
for proof........irrefutable,
of God...........whatever it's true nature.

Thursday, May 3, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: faith
True believers should read just the left
while atheists should read just the right.
In-betweeners should link up the weft
thus making a whole that's no doubt slight.
Danny Draper 06 May 2012

This is fantastic. Two poems in 1, two trains of thought together but as separate as the gulf in belief systems. As said by others an innovative construction, well done.

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Captain Cur 06 May 2012

Very clever indeed! And here I was trying to fill in the blanks. Two poems in one. But when you read it, the breaks give you time to think and consider the message.10!

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Valerie Dohren 05 May 2012

Another great poem Diane - well written as always.

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Wahab Abdul 04 May 2012

excellent love it....innovative

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Eric Cockrell 03 May 2012

love this... both the construction, and the thoughts behind!

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Jensen Hood 25 September 2013

This is so unique I don't think I could have ever come up with that

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Chuck Audette 12 July 2012

A perfect trinity presented. I wonder if a trigee could successfully work if it was splitting words as well.. fat.... her son and holy ghost?

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Aditi Khandelwal 23 June 2012

Excellent poem.. I have never read a poem so unique.. This is really good!

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Johnathan Juarez 16 May 2012

first time i have ever read a poem like this. love the subject matter not to mention the structure is wonderous

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Mark R Slaughter 08 May 2012

I've not come across this type of poem form before. Fascinating! I wonder which side I relate to?

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