Arwen Lee CW

Rookie (06-08-1983 / Kuantan, Malaysia)

Frozen - Poem by Arwen Lee CW

I can't see your heart and you can't see min
Nor can I feel the ardour that once was divine
Flowers of the promises fall in the frost
Whip of doubt strikes down the trust
If everything's gone and no longer exist
Why is the plainness of ache still persist
Stuck in the middle od the present and the past
Be my savior before everything comes to the last.....

Comments about Frozen by Arwen Lee CW

  • Kesav Easwaran (11/20/2008 8:37:00 AM)

    a touching prayer...the last lines really penetrate...well written piece, Arwen...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/21/2008 2:46:00 AM)

    Really a beautiful poem, nicely bloomed. Love it. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/20/2008 2:16:00 PM)

    remnants of loving feeling creeps when you are not busy. nice (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 11, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 13, 2011

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