Thursday, July 14, 2011

Gentle Spirit Comments

Rating: 5.0
I can’t breathe
Unless you soothe me
With your angelic smiles
And Take me to the heavenly doors


Rekha Mandagere
Heather Wilkins 12 August 2013
your presence is a lovely breeze it's gravity I can't define I love this quote. beautiful
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Terence George Craddock 16 August 2012
I can’t breathe Unless you soothe me With your angelic smiles is the beauty and joyous reward of loving greatly and deeply. God give me all earthly grief I stand and suffer silently But never isolate me from This gentle, naughty, silvern spirit! is a prayer of true love prepared to suffer greatly, yet endue silently, if only the lover is never parted from the 'gentle, naughty' beloved prized above all else. A beautiful poem read with a smile in the heart and in the eyes.
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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012
U r mesmerizing...lovely
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Bernard Snyder 02 January 2012
Never isolate me from this gentle, naughty, silvern spirit_____Awesome! ! ! ! ! Well written verses Rekha! !
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Aranthabailu Ummar 16 September 2011
when expect more we getting self disapoint too. This what ur poem says. In one side we demands to be loved by our offsprings with sooth, care, smile etc and in other side we admitting ourselves that life is not a fresh flower like instead it is dry. A dryness will not yeild anything support to liveliness. I cannot understand why these two matter collaborated here. May be you livve alone or lonliness covers you.
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Unwritten Soul 09 September 2011
Bombarding expression for the soul to explore the words here..It warming all the surface and while smile reading this...beautiful write_Unwritten Soul
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Matt Mooney 19 July 2011
A lovely poem of two halves and what a contrast between the two.Light and shade defines a painting.You have painted love.10.
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Antonio Liao 19 July 2011
“Great, volition of thought riding in the spirit of harmony”.... I like it...thank you my sister and God bless...10+++
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 July 2011
Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing.....
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Luz Hanaii 18 July 2011
Extensive use of vocabulary to describe how love can change our perception to life. The first half shows the positive side of love and the second is filled with despair. When in love and things are going well, we tend to see life as good (beautiful) and when not, we see life as not being good. Yet I've discovered that, 'Life is neither good nor bad, life is life'... we decide accordingly. Very well written. Enjoyed it much.
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Louis Cecile 18 July 2011
I like the use of language in the first section. Big bold and complex then the poem changes and the language gets more simple but still effective.
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Hans Vr 14 July 2011
keep the spirit high, good poem
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