Ramona Thompson

Get You Out Of My Life

Rewrite of the Jodeci song, All My Life
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Topic(s) of this poem: culture day

Form: Lyric


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  • A B Faniki (9/11/2019 3:28:00 AM)

    Nicely done. I enjoye the piece. Thanks for sharing

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (9/4/2019 11:18:00 PM)

    Denouncing the over possessiveness and deceitful behavior of lover, throwing him out of life. Great message. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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  • Chan MongolChan Mongol (9/4/2019 9:48:00 PM)

    Reflected the fact of life. Thanks.

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  • James MclainJames Mclain (9/4/2019 12:11:00 PM)

    Hey Ramona,
    Congrats on your poem.

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  • Sarah PerssonSarah Persson (9/4/2019 12:07:00 PM)

    To pray that someone will perish shows a cruel and vicious heart, a little too much evil here for me I'm afraid

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (9/4/2019 11:08:00 AM)

    I do hope that you have got rid of him in a peaceful way. This is after all a lovely poem, well worded
    and excellently rendered. BUT heart wrenching. I like the spontaneous nature the poem is built up.
    CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A 10 Full Score and much much more. Success I wish you in meeting the right boy-friend, some foreign blend.

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (9/4/2019 10:08:00 AM)

    Love and pain! ! !

    Heartbreak.


    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (9/4/2019 9:33:00 AM)

    I pray I never find another lover
    As bitter as you.. thoughts, experiences, bitterness, love. words. tony

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (9/4/2019 7:26:00 AM)

    Straight from the heart. A heart touching poem on failed love and how such bitter feelings one experienced. A nice poem indeed. Congrats on being selected as poem of the day.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (9/4/2019 6:09:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem on deepest feeling of life having touching expression with nice collocation. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of POD.

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  • Darwin Henry BeuningDarwin Henry Beuning (9/4/2019 4:52:00 AM)

    Ramona, A very hurtful poem. may you find peace and happiness in your life.

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (9/4/2019 1:31:00 AM)

    oh
    love is bleeding here
    fear lives in fair! ! !
    no room in heart for the cheater
    before God no prayer............////

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (9/4/2019 12:12:00 AM)

    Fine lyric... beautiful poem..////

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (8/15/2019 9:24:00 PM)

    An insightful rendition from the heart. A very passionate composition with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Ramona.

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