Kumarmani Mahakul

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Glacial Night - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

In form of glacier this night has appeared,
Rainy night this is but very cold we feel,
Many think winter has come but it is not,
Thick glacial deposits are seen on road.

Full moonlight falling on snow is smiling,
We see faces of stars on surface of snow,
Moon is reflected here and we feel falling,
Night beauty is forming dreamland of love.

Creatures are sleeping but night is awakened,
To watch all and give them beauty of rest,
Nice arrangement is done by nature for us,
Extremely slow movement of snow motivates.

Water crystals are freezing in pond and lake,
But freezing will melt after sleeping in dream,
Light will appear to touch gently and kiss snow,
This melting will flow in stream to river to sea.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,7 July,2017. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: dream, love, night, perception

Form: Prose Poem


Comments about Glacial Night by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • (3/3/2019 10:11:00 PM)

    Water crystals carry beauty. Greatest love comes from God through light into Earth. We feel this. This is really great when love is transformed into light of love of wisdom. Love glows and grows with us. This is a great write and you are a nice poet. (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (8/9/2017 10:12:00 AM)

    Yeah, the ultimate destination is the sea. Awesome poetry. Loved each stanza of it.

    Creatures are sleeping but night is awakened,
    To watch all and give them beauty of rest,
    Nice arrangement is done by nature for us,
    Extremely slow movement of snow motivates.
    ... imagination is running at its best. Thanks for posting.10++++
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  • Muzahidul Reza (8/8/2017 12:15:00 PM)

    Water crystals are freezing in pond and lake,
    But freezing will melt after sleeping in dream,
    Light will appear to touch gently and kiss snow,
    This melting will flow in stream to river to sea. excellently write, thank you for sharing the poem with us
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  • Unwritten Soul (8/8/2017 8:35:00 AM)

    Beautiful imagination lead you to gorgeous journey here in poetry, that paint such a beautiful scenery...i even can imagine i stroking my brush and colour on canvas just by reading this while imagining what the looks it can be...loved this (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 7, 2017



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