poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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God Is With Us

God is with us - Perception
Friday,14th August 2020

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2020 3:24:00 AM)

    Poem: 59055515 - God Is With Us
    Member: Mahtab Bangalee
    Comment: Superb poem penned on the human belief, perception of God and earthly life. Congrats for being selected this poem as POD.....always deserves 10+

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2020 3:23:00 AM)

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    In this poem, the 3rd,4th,5th,6th & 7th stanzas carry different perceptions about belief on God and human earthly life.

    In the 3rd stanza written about the presence of God- yes, if God is everywhere, then why we should fear anyone without the Almighty.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2020 3:20:00 AM)

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    In the 3rd stanza written about the presence of God- yes, if God is everywhere then why we should fear anyone without the Almighty.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2020 3:19:00 AM)

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    Comment: (......)
    In the 4th stanza written about the mercy of God- yes, richness and poverty both are the human mental condition not for eternal for those can ask purely HIS mercy s/he can live in rich condition always.


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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2020 3:18:00 AM)

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    In the 5th stanza written about the richness and poverty- yes, both of this not the curse from God but merely depend human activeness on this earth.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2020 3:17:00 AM)

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    In the 7th or last stanza written about happiness in human life- yes, happiness and unhappiness both are the forms of human inner satisfaction, both perceptions come together to those people who are not strong inside.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2020 3:16:00 AM)

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    In the 6th stanza written about the so-called rich and their habitual foods- yes, those peoples are not rich by heart though they want to eat good rich food for their physical condition, they need to have normal food like as vegetarian.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2020 3:16:00 AM)

    Poem: 59055515 - God Is With Us
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    Comment: It's a great poem of philosophy." God has no different yardstick.honour the state of richness and donate never insult a man who begs at your gate poverty is no curse it is a force to reckon with"
    Golden lines reminding us to be more humanistic....10

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  • Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair (9/3/2020 11:13:00 PM)

    It's a great poem of philosophy." God has no different yardstick.honour the state of richness and donate never insult a man who begs at your gate poverty is no curse it is a force to reckon with"
    Golden lines reminding us to be more humanistic....10

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (9/3/2020 10:54:00 PM)

    (.......)
    In the 6th stanza written about the so-called rich and their habitual foods- yes, those peoples are not rich by heart though they want to eat good rich food for their physical condition, they need to have normal food like as vegetarian.

    In the 7th or last stanza written about happiness in human life- yes, happiness and unhappiness both are the forms of human inner satisfaction, both perceptions come together to those people who are not strong inside.

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (9/3/2020 10:53:00 PM)

    (......)
    In the 4th stanza written about the mercy of God- yes, richness and poverty both are the human mental condition not for eternal for those can ask purely HIS mercy s/he can live in rich condition always.

    In the 5th stanza written about the richness and poverty- yes, both of this not the curse from God but merely depend human activeness on this earth.

    (......)

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (9/3/2020 10:52:00 PM)

    Superb poem penned on the human belief, perception of God and earthly life. Congrats for being selected this poem as POD.....always deserves 10+

    In this poem, the 3rd,4th,5th,6th & 7th stanzas carry different perceptions about belief on God and human earthly life.

    In the 3rd stanza written about the presence of God- yes, if God is everywhere then why we should fear anyone without the Almighty.
    (.........)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2020 12:13:00 PM)

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    never insult a man who begs at your gate........ outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2020 12:13:00 PM)

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    Comment: the richness and poverty
    they are two formidable arms of an almighty
    honour the state of richness and donate

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2020 12:12:00 PM)

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    Comment: " Rich people can't eat delicious food
    for the poor, simple food is always good
    both have to work hard to digest
    one tries with exercise and others with the best available" The tone of realism and minute observation is commendable... Thanks

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (9/3/2020 11:18:00 AM)

    the richness and poverty
    they are two formidable arms of an almighty
    honour the state of richness and donate
    never insult a man who begs at your gate........ outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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  • Sachidananda PandaSachidananda Panda (9/3/2020 11:15:00 AM)

    " Rich people can't eat delicious food
    for the poor, simple food is always good
    both have to work hard to digest
    one tries with exercise and others with the best available" The tone of realism and minute observation is commendable... Thanks

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  • Sachidananda PandaSachidananda Panda (9/3/2020 11:13:00 AM)

    " When we claim and advocate
    with minute observation and state
    " God is omnipresent and everywhere"
    there should be no doubt or fear" ... True to the core and encouraging... Thanks

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2020 11:12:00 AM)

    Poem: 59055515 - God Is With Us
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    Comment: Humanity! !
    Human relation!
    Muse of the rich and the poor! ! ! !
    Mankind on earth.


    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2020 11:11:00 AM)

    Poem: 59055515 - God Is With Us
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    Comment: So happy to read couple of wonderful poems on PoemHunter page. Congratulations to Dr. Mehta for having a poem so deserving as member poem. I hope more people abide by these beautiful words of wisdom.

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