Dwayne Earle Gordon

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Good Thinking - Poem by Dwayne Earle Gordon

What is your problem
What do you think life is,
It is not what you are thinking
If you could see, your life is sinking.
Don't do anymore of that crap
You know what I am talking
Going on the corner and smoking crack.
I know you may think this is a play,
But you should do the right thing, don't follow what others say.
Dont be a bom, and stay on the streets.
Be a man, own one of the finest suites.


Comments about Good Thinking by Dwayne Earle Gordon

  • Patricia Grantham (10/26/2015 5:59:00 AM)


    Very positive and motivational write. Nice. (Report) Reply

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  • john tiong chunghoo (5/18/2005 10:29:00 AM)


    i love the last line: be man own one of the finest sweet. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 18, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, May 23, 2005
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