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Goodbye Mother Dear

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Mother, mother, mother dear,
Can you hold me close, can you hold me near?
Mother, mother, oh mother dear,
Will you listen, listen to my words of fear?

Mother, I am inside your womb.
Mother, you hold the key.
Mother, is it too late, too soon?
Mother, what do you see?

I hear your heart beat, beat, beat,
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Mary Murphy 10 November 2008

This poem is well written, I'm sorry for my 'blissful' beleifs against it's message. At first glance I thought this was a pro-life poem...I guess the ending just shocked me a bit.

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Mary Murphy 09 November 2008

It's so sad any mother could put their own child's life to death. Inside or outside of their womb...whats the difference. ='(so so sad.

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Brandon Hill 09 December 2007

Awwww. I feel like crying. That is a splendid piece of work.

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Leslie Burleson 12 August 2007

that is a very sad poem

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