Sunday, March 11, 2007

Goofus Comments

Rating: 4.7
Sometimes my mind is crazy
Sometimes my mind is dumb
Sometimes it sings like angel wings
And beeps like kingdom come.

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Dennis Lee
COMMENTS
Michelle Earl 26 April 2010
Oh, I love this poem! I love its' humor and it's rhyme! It's simple, yet elegant in my opinion. I laughed and laughed when I read your poem. Thank you for a wonderful read.
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 February 2008
Well, well done. Here there are no negatives. Some will complain about the simple construction of the rhyme but that's because the readers of today have no sense of humor for this old, original, form of poetry. They might see it as trite. You can ignore them though, and take pride in doing what they cannot.
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