! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Green Of Wild*! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Green Of Wild*! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


goodness reasons to revel by reality
heart yet knows right path to heaven
eyes raves back by illusion of mirage
light refluxes into room of delusion

do we ever know depth of eyes by mystery?
as sands gleaned on shore delving blue
myth of blindness yet they still read
moment swirls by winds unfolding dreams

moon seems to be here on top of hill
whispers allays sorrow by voices
where is the time lost to living,
life when reasoned to grip of wine
as desire mills through green of wild.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Heart 07 February 2009

yes, that is a bit mystery. good on writing the words togather to make a peace. very nice!

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Reshma Ramesh 08 February 2009

wow! ! and the mystery of the way u write............? beautifully penned

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Chitra - 08 February 2009

phrases of poetic eloquence...a beautifully crafted poem

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Michael P. Johnson 08 February 2009

This! My dear friend is beautiful.......a sheer delight

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2009

Beautifully crafted poem, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Obinna Eruchie 03 June 2009

a deeply thought provoking poem, good poetry.

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Randy Hogan 20 February 2009

I read this poem a think....really how deep is your soul... since space is a bubble.....and not infinite...at lest not our plan, maybe our soul is so large we have to fold it..to fit into cosmos. but still remain in GODs hands........ A moving poem so well done.....................

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Alicia Maestri 20 February 2009

Much better, reaching into your soul, looking for answers to real questions, i liked it alot.

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If all in life is an illusion then what is real? Truth is in the eye of the beholder but do each of us see it the same way? I gave you another ten.Very thought provoking poem.thank you...

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Maria Barbara Korynt 18 February 2009

Very much nicely written. Excellent workshop, is always recognizable :) before me they said so a lot, that here to add nothing - to take hold of nothing. I like it. I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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