louis rams

Gold Star - 12,509 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

Growing Old Together - Poem by louis rams

They had grown old together -always in search
Of something better.
But little did they know they had it together from the get go.
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Topic(s) of this poem: aging

Form: Verse


Comments about Growing Old Together by louis rams

  • Practicing PoetessPracticing Poetess (9/10/2019 6:19:00 PM)

    A very sweet poem summarizing contentment.
    The quieter, peaceful, easy feeling of being in the company of someone who knows you well, and years of shared experiences and memories.
    This is what most of us long for, someday. : -)
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  • Irfanulla Shariff (9/6/2019 11:42:00 AM)

    They had grown old together -always in search
    Of something better.
    But little did they know they had it together from the get go.

    A great story of love birds who had great bond together….Incredible message! Very well composed. Thanks for sharing it, Louis.10+
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    louis rams(9/6/2019 7:32:00 PM)

    i thank you so much for coming to my site and making such a beautiful comment.

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  • Lyn PaulLyn Paul (8/25/2019 5:03:00 PM)

    A wonderful marriage where everything is shared.
    Your words spread joy into aging.
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