Friday, January 20, 2006

Grubs And Disire Comments

Rating: 4.8
LIGHTING struck the
ground you walk on,
LIKE a spear, it hits
a vein.IT bleeds, and

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DAVID GERARDINO
COMMENTS
Allan James Saywell 20 January 2006
when i read this poem it made me think about what a woman with a loose morality said to me way back in my past she said a quick wash will wipe away my guilt and i thought to myself will she wash her soul as well good write david regards AJS
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Michael Voorhis 20 January 2006
I like the poem, but it just seems like you capitalize the wrong words. Its completely up to you how you write your poetry, but when you capitalize a whole word, you are usually trying to put emphasis on it.The words 'like' or 'the' really dont need emphasis in my opinion. Nice poem anyway, Michael
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