Such beauty in so few words, great write Alison. Best wishes, Andrew x
Delicate to the eyes touch, well done again with this one Alison
Love duncan X
a wonderful, simple, sexy write Ali..wow! I remember my first guitar concert..Thanks..
The pure light of inspiration shines from these brief lines. Music is indeed the soul of poetry.
Soft, sensual music colours these finely crafted words...beautiful Allie.j xx
Silken images -These words unleash
The colours of music
Keep strumming Allie, your music is a pleasure to the ear. Subarashi desu. Arigato Gozaimasu.
Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Allie, I went to a concert last night at this wonderful piece brought back some of the guitar solos included within it. Beautiful short Poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend.
As light as lace; as delicate as a dragonfly's wings; as gentle as a ripple caused by a mild breeze yet aesthetically enrapturing. This is something to be felt in a realm of sensation which goes beyond words. My hat off to you.
Ten simple words, carrying such power, and mind-muse....Allie, this has to be one of the better senyru's i've read on this site...*APPLAUDING*.....*NOW, STANDING & APPLAUDING, WITH MORE RAPID CLAMOR* [Yes, it's time for your curtsy]
Tomorrow, would you believe, i will have been on/off/on/offf & on yhis site for 2 years....April 6th,2006....i posted the initial draft of 'While You Were Asleep''!
~ FjR ~
Awww, Jerry said it first! The power of senryu comes from ordering words with infinite possibility; if chosen well they may be re-ordered without losing impact. This is one of those gems. Rgds, Ivan
Light, fanciful, perfect for that spring fever I've been feeling...Coach
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