Sunday, April 6, 2008

Guitar Concerto - Senryu Comments

Rating: 4.6

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Alison Cassidy
COMMENTS
Andrew Blakemore 02 May 2008

Such beauty in so few words, great write Alison. Best wishes, Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 18 April 2008

Delicate to the eyes touch, well done again with this one Alison Love duncan X

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Meggie Gultiano 11 April 2008

a wonderful, simple, sexy write Ali..wow! I remember my first guitar concert..Thanks..

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Sandra Fowler 08 April 2008

The pure light of inspiration shines from these brief lines. Music is indeed the soul of poetry. Love, Sandra

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R H 06 April 2008

Soft, sensual music colours these finely crafted words...beautiful Allie.j xx

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Raveendran . 06 April 2008

Silken images -These words unleash The colours of music

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Ernestine Northover 06 April 2008

Keep strumming Allie, your music is a pleasure to the ear. Subarashi desu. Arigato Gozaimasu. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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David Harris 06 April 2008

Allie, I went to a concert last night at this wonderful piece brought back some of the guitar solos included within it. Beautiful short Poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David xxx

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Leonard Daranjo 06 April 2008

As light as lace; as delicate as a dragonfly's wings; as gentle as a ripple caused by a mild breeze yet aesthetically enrapturing. This is something to be felt in a realm of sensation which goes beyond words. My hat off to you. Take care

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Ten simple words, carrying such power, and mind-muse....Allie, this has to be one of the better senyru's i've read on this site...*APPLAUDING*.....*NOW, STANDING & APPLAUDING, WITH MORE RAPID CLAMOR* [Yes, it's time for your curtsy] Tomorrow, would you believe, i will have been on/off/on/offf & on yhis site for 2 years....April 6th,2006....i posted the initial draft of 'While You Were Asleep''! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Ivan Donn Carswell 06 April 2008

Awww, Jerry said it first! The power of senryu comes from ordering words with infinite possibility; if chosen well they may be re-ordered without losing impact. This is one of those gems. Rgds, Ivan

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Coach Roth 06 April 2008

Light, fanciful, perfect for that spring fever I've been feeling...Coach

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Jerry Hughes 06 April 2008

...........................................quite erotic

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