Thursday, January 2, 2003

Haiku Comments

Rating: 0.0

Little brother, long-gone ­
the river water is cold,
this summer afternoon

...

Everett F. Briggs
COMMENTS
* Sunprincess * 30 April 2014

............the river seems to be cold most of the time....i can feel you miss your brother in this write....you penned a wonderful haiku in his honor...

0 2 Reply
Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

I find this little haiku incredibly sad but nicely written.

1 1 Reply