Jez Brul


Haiku 21 - Poem by Jez Brul

From the highest hills
to the deepest riverbeds,
I will follow you.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship

Form: Haiku


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is the author's conviction on love and friendship.

Comments about Haiku 21 by Jez Brul

  • (7/29/2019 9:52:00 AM)

    A wonderful haiku. anjandev roy. (Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha Pathak (7/9/2019 12:40:00 AM)

    A lovely haiku.
    Its brilliance comes thru its simplicity.
    Kudos.
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  • Kostas Lagos (5/9/2018 11:40:00 AM)

    I can't believe I missed this one! Incredible! (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/29/2018 4:19:00 PM)

    God is highest among the highest stars and everything highest we consider. Our love and friendship with God is eternal and this never breaks. We love to have such continuous relationship with him that motivates us towards higher realm. This poem is deeply philosophical and this has deep insight. This is excellently penned pretty poem...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Nudershada Cabanes (4/29/2018 3:09:00 AM)

    Beautifully penned haiku Jez. Full of conviction and faith. Well done. (Report)Reply

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  • Aqua Flower (4/25/2018 9:34:00 PM)

    Such a passionate write about love and friendship! In just three lines, you've summed it all up! A wonderful piece! (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa George (4/24/2018 11:35:00 PM)

    A wonderful affirmation of love and the declaration to stick together even through the adversities of life! This can come only from a heart that has tasted love in its fullness! A beautiful senryu! (Report)Reply

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  • Ihe Nnamdi (4/23/2018 11:11:00 AM)

    ok Jez...I see you.. (Report)Reply

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  • Mihaela Pirjol (4/20/2018 2:22:00 AM)

    A short and powerful declaration of love, fitting perfectly in 17 syllables. Loved it! (Report)Reply

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  • Carl Roussell (4/19/2018 8:53:00 AM)

    Very pretty write - three lines that make you stop and feel. I think this might be one of your best Haiku! (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/19/2018 12:31:00 AM)

    Dear Jez, such a great conviction on relationship...10+++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Susan Williams (4/18/2018 8:40:00 PM)

    Your love is like a river then! I like your images from the highest to the deepest as metaphors for your love! I admire your exploration of different poem forms- haiku and cinquin! (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/18/2018 1:55:00 PM)

    True love is the key! !

    True love is stronger than steel!

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Kelly Kurt (4/18/2018 10:15:00 AM)

    A wonderfully written piece. Technically, this is a Senryu. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/18/2018 8:39:00 AM)

    The conviction of author on love and friendship has been astutely and intensively depicted within three lines. This is an unique presentation. Thank u dear madam for pisting this beautiful haiku.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (4/18/2018 8:15:00 AM)

    Have to revisit this brilliant haiku to put a mark and vote.10
    Onto my Poem List.
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    Jez Brul(4/18/2018 8:39:00 AM)

    Words are not enough to say thank you for your kindness, dear poet Rose...wish u all d best.❤️

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  • Rini Shibu (4/18/2018 7:28:00 AM)

    Great conviction...love follows where there is truth (Report)Reply

    Jez Brul(4/18/2018 8:40:00 AM)

    Absolutely, dear poet Rini..thank you for your appreciation.❤️

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (4/18/2018 7:20:00 AM)

    A poem of great depth.
    Brevity at its finest. It conveys that love is beyond measure.
    Brilliant haiku.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 18, 2018

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 18, 2018


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