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Haiku-A Snake

Rating: 5.0
A circle writhing
Smaller and diminishing
Snake makes bad mistake
Haiku-A Snake
Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
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AintGonnaPutMyName 02 October 2018
snake commiting murder.... of it's self
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Sophie 09 November 2017
That was a awesome haiku
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Bri Edwards 19 March 2016
i ain't a haiku expert, but i think this one hits the spot! ! ! nature and descriptive. i think the snake was just having a bad day. bri :) re other comment below, maybe big instead of bad, though i think it IS a bad mistake also. some dumb boa? well, it can't hurt to send to MyPoemList, can it?
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Simone Inez Harriman 23 November 2015
The snake consuming self.....Very thought provoking Loke......10
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Seema Jayaraman 03 November 2015
Is this an actual picture? How did the snake make such a mistake, a witty write and you have a picture to support it too.. ps. I think perhaps if you remove 'bad' from the third line, will make this a perfect haiku fitting the 5-7-5 syllable meter, though I am still a student learning technicalities of haiku. thanks.
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Loke Kok Yee 03 November 2015
I put in thebad to make it 5
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Souren Mondal 02 November 2015
A very witty and profound thought.. We are often the architect of our own destruction.. Thanks for sharing..
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Sanjukta Nag 02 November 2015
Oh nooo! Deep thought. We all are same more or less.
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Kelly Kurt 01 November 2015
We all bite ourselves at one time or another. Just not literally : -)
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M Asim Nehal 01 November 2015
Ha ha ha....It is like teeth biting tongue.....Witty Haiku.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2015
Wonderful haiku shared on snake that amazes mind really. Wise in thought you are...10
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