M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,655 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Haiku/ Senryu ~ 7 (Hide And Seek) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Moon hides in blue mist
to test our patience in love,
Firefly is teasing.

Hiding in my heart
I desire to take your love
to eternal place.

Playing hide and seek
Life coerce to strange places
New avenues found.

Topic(s) of this poem: hiding

Form: Haiku


Comments about Haiku/ Senryu ~ 7 (Hide And Seek) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/27/2016 2:35:00 PM)


    Patience in love. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/6/2015 12:13:00 PM)


    Magical series man..No comments? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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