Saturday, October 24, 2009

*haiku Series Viii: A Kiss Away Comments

Rating: 3.0

You are a kiss
away from thinking of me...
thinking of you

...

Lillian Susan Thomas
COMMENTS
Karen LaRose 26 October 2009

I love this. The haiku is probably the hardest form for me because it is so limited yet you put it together so nicely. Love it!

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Kerry O'Connor 25 October 2009

This becomes an instant favourite, Lillian. It says it all.

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Sonya Florentino 24 October 2009

nothing is as sweet as anticipation....!

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Joseph Poewhit 24 October 2009

Has a suspension of feeling

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